Improvements

March 11th, 2012
In class today, we were able to show Jimmy the progress we made over the weekend. We spent a lot of time last class trying to find a creative visual that would symbolically fit with our concept of growth. Once we chose the visual, we met up on Friday and filmed our ideas. We had a completely new concept from what Jimmy last saw and he seemed to be impressed by our ideas and visuals however, he was unimpressed by our text color choices, the wording and the intro. My partner Dapeng and I sat down together and tried to come up with a catchy beginning that would graspthe viewers attention but at the same time would make sense and fit with the abstract theme of growth throughout the video. Eventually we felt it was best if we scratch the beginning we had, fix the coloring on the wording and make it more direct and relevant. I feel the changes we made improved the video a great deal but it's now only 1:47s so we need to either leave as is or try to add a little more so we can have more time. I posted the most current video in the previous post. Check it out!
Now we can work on our addition piece.